•Number of people living in that area/ number of people to a house
•Types of houses and what the houses were like inside and out.
•Conditions in that area (sewage, drinking water and privies)
•The spread of Cholera
You need to outline what the conditions for each bullet point were like and then explain how you could improve each condition.
Intro - what area are you reporting on? Why are you doing the report?
Topic sentence - what condition? This part of the report will focus on...
Evidence - what were the details at the time? The conditions were like...In addition, it was also...
Explain - how could you improve things and why would it help? As an improvement, I suggest....This would improve these conditions because...